Checking for grammatical and spelling mistakes is a given, as well as correcting "Americanisms" (e.g. trash can -> rubbish bin). And I always welcome general constructive criticism and any comments that might improve readability. Knowledge of London is not relevant to this particular fic, but it will be for my next project. If you PM me your email address (or email me at maritacovarrubias at hotmail dot com) I'll send the file over.