What an engaging, amazing ride. I'm not a huge fan of super!Ianto stories, but I did like the different "stages" you took us through with him (the bit about the negative spike and Roland near the end was very nicely done -- lets the reader fill in the blanks beautifully). Also, the first-time scene was very moving and plausible; younger-Ianto-shags-Jack is another fandom trope seldom done this well. By all means give us more -- this is resolved enough not to call for a sequel of any kind, but you have a knack for the timey-wimey, and perhaps you'll indulge us with similar tales?
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Date: 2009-10-08 05:42 pm (UTC)